书面表达(满分25分)假如你是李华,下星期六是你的生日,你准备在家开一个...
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时间：2024-10-10 02:42
228 Yingcai Road
September 11, 2013
Dear Jack,
Next Saturday will be my birthday. I’m going to hold a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 7:30. Some classmates as well as some foreign friends are also invited. The activities include singing, dancing and sharing interesting experiences. Surely, we’ll have a good time. I would feel honored if you could come.
I live at 228 Yingcai Road. You can take Buses No 3 or No 16 and get off at the stop of Hengshui High School. Just on the opposite of the stop is my house which is red with a white door. I’m sure you can’t miss it.
I do hope you will come.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
试题分析：本题为材料作文，在写作之前要注意审题，作文的评分共包括三个方面的内容，即内容，语言，和组织结构分。本题内容陈述较为详细，所以在内容方面，审题较为简单。语言方面要注意对复杂的句型结构，例如倒装，强调等的运用。同时要使上下文衔接，浑然一体。
【亮点说明】所给范文中恰当的使用了Just on the opposite of the stop is my house which is red with a white door.这句话，即倒装句型的运用。这样的句子使得句子的变幻丰富多彩，从而使文章有感染力。
【考点】考查学生语言的综合运用能力
