英语段落在线纠错,在线等 英语短文纠错 万分感谢!
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时间：2023-06-28 13:01
第一篇Myfavouritefilmis2012(举例),Itwastalkabouttheworldisend.IloveitbecauseitisveryshockandIthinkitisthebestfilminmyheart.WhenIwatchthefilmIwassurprised.Ican'tthinkitbeforeIwatchthefilm.Ittellusweneedtoenvironmentalprotectionatonceortheearthwillsoondestroy.Ithinkweshouldstartfromsmall.Environmentalprotectioneverytime.Now,letwedoitandourearthwillbethemostbeautifulplanteinthespace.第二篇IwentChongQinginFebruary22.Itisacitywhichwasbuiltnearmountains.SopeoplecallitMountainCity\.InChongQing,IwenttotheRedStoneCenter,toseetheplaceswhichtheprisonerslivedinthepast.Itisaterribleandawfultrip.Therearealotofdogs,andsoldierswithgunsneartheprisons.Andmostoftheprisonsaregood,theydidn’twanttotellthebadpeoplewheretheotherpeoplewere.Theylivedinverysmallhouses.Nogoodfoodtoeat,nogoodwatertodrink.Theyhadonlytwentyminutestostayoutsideperdaybuttheystillsaidnothing.Ithinktheyaretheherosinthatcentury.Iwillfollowtheirspirit.第三篇DearAnne,Iamwritingthislettertoappreciateforthekindlyinvitationforthedinnerpartyonthelastweekend.Iwashavingaquitewonderfulfeastwithallfriendsthereandenjoyedthemverymuch,andIgotapresentaswell,whichwasaverycutebadgefromMr.Cliff.Hewassittingjustnexttome,andhetoldmeheusedtobeageologyprofessorworkedforourCollege.Thatwasamazing.Ialsoenjoyedthemusic,youknow,thesongsgivenbyJanewerequitelovely.IneverknowsheevencouldsingaChinesesong.Bytheway,IhavetosaytheendspeechpresentedbyyourbrotherJohnwasveryawesomeandhelpful.So,thankyouforeveryingfortheinvitation,andyouhaveagoodnewweek.BestRegards,Gross_Poseur兄弟帮你写出来了，希望你能加分给我吧谢谢！
