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英语六级作文范文

2023-06-10 来源:要发发知识网
大学英语四级六级考试(CET)指南: 1、基本正确

四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单,而是严重错误太多。基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型,只要使用得基本正确,也可以得到及格分数。考生最常犯的语言错误有三类:语法、拼写、标点。最常犯的语法错误包括:时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。 2、丰富多变

基础较好的同学,要想取得四、六级写作高分,应做到丰富多变。丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好不要重复出现,应尽量使用同、近义词替换(无法替换的关键词除外)。例如:think可以替换为reckon, assume, argue等词。如果想不到同、近义词,可以使用上义词进行替换。此外,句型也应富于变化,不要拘泥于主谓宾句型,可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。

四级作文如果量化成句数,只需写10句左右;六级只需12句左右。全文应以短句为主,长短句相结合。所谓短句是指10个词左右的句子,不能全篇都是5、6个词的短句。同时,全文应有一定数量的长句,一般15~20词即可,太长则易冗赘。有的同学以为只写长句不写短句,就能取得高分,实际上老师看长句会觉得很累,以为你不会写短句,通常不会给高分。如果一篇中文作文每句都30多个字,定然晦涩难懂,英文也不例外。精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调; 复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。 高分真经 (一)背诵

背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝,可分为以下5个层次:(1)精彩词汇;(2)精彩句型;(3)精彩句子;(4)万能框架;(5)经典范文。注意句子和句型不一样,精彩句子应作为单词来记忆。背诵前,确保自己已充分理解所有内容。 语言学习有两个关键词——输入(INPUT)和输出(OUTPUT)。听力和阅读属于输入,考生处于被动状态,只需在考场上将听到和看到的东西弄懂。应对这种题目的技巧很多,容易在短期内提高。但口语和写作属于输出,考生必须变被动为主动,这很难在短期内突破。没有大量的输入,很难进行自由输出。

四、六级写作需要在30分钟内完成一篇短文,共计120或150余字,很多同学叫苦不迭。但若将其改为中文作文,大家就会觉得易如反掌。原因何在?俗话说:“熟读唐诗三百首,不会做诗也能吟。”同学们从小到大

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背诵了大量中文佳作,可以随意组合,自由输出。然而,在英语学习中,多数同学只沉溺于背单词、抠语法、做阅读,很少有人背诵英文文章。正因为没有大量输入,写作才始终处于“挤牙膏”状态,想一句说一句,说一句翻译一句。

提高英语写作要多读、多背、多写、多改。多读、多背是首要任务,是积累输入的关键。考生应大量积累经典英文句型、表达和范文,平时勤于背诵。

有的同学问我,说自己背过很多英文文章,但上了考场还是大脑一片空白,什么都想不起来。这种情况很常见,主要有两个原因:一是没有进行造句的工作,只是盲目背诵。二是背得不够熟练。学习任何东西都讲究先求质,再求量。大家英语学了很多年,文章看了很多,为什么写作还是学不好?关键是量铺开了,但质没有上去。一篇文章应背到脱口而出的程度,如果还需要过脑子,就证明背得不够熟练。一知半解,背得再多也是徒劳。 (二)默写

背完经典范文后,进行默写。然后对照原文纠错,搞清楚错在什么地方。多数同学在写的时候都会犯小错误,如拼写、单复数、大小写等。这些就是你在写作中的弱点,也是阅卷老师最不能容忍的地方。培根说过:“Writing makes an exact man.”(写作使人精确。)只有默写下来你才会发现自己常犯哪些错误。 (三)中译英

中译英也是提高写作的好方法。根据范文的中文译文,将其按自己的理解译成英文。译完后,你就会发现自己的翻译和原文有很大差距,这些差距就是取得写作高分的关键。这时,对照范文,看看原作者是怎么写的,思考为什么这么写。同样的一句中文,范文中使用了哪些词汇和句型?你使用了哪些词汇和句型?学习范文使用不同的词汇和句型。通过不断练习,你的写作水平不知不觉就提高了。 (四)写作

模仿范文写作新的文章,套用范文的精彩词汇、句型、句子和框架。最初套用时可能比较生硬,但随着不断的积累,组合起来会越来越顺手。

上述的高分策略是提高四、六级英语写作水平最有效的方法。在练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语,以扩大词汇量,拓展知识面。背单词时要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义,并了解

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其使用环境。备考时,熟记一些过渡词、句型和范文,并进行仿写。考试时,使用学习过的、熟悉而有把握的词汇和句型,没有把握的句子,尽量采取“回避政策”,切忌自编自造汉语式的英语词组和句型。 英语六级作文范文 第一篇

Directions: In this section you are required to write a composition on the topic “Reduce Waste on Campus”. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1. 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重; 2. 浪费的危害; 3. 从我做起,杜绝浪费。

Reduce Waste on Campus

As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on.

The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development. If they don’t learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help.

As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. What’s more, I’m determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus. 第二篇

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Internet Surfing (因特网冲浪)

Nowadays, there is a growing popularity of Internet surfing on college campus. An increasing number of students, majoring either in science or engineering or in liberal arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen interest everyday.

Internet surfing has attracted college students like magnets because it is the world of Internet and the world of globalization. First, with the global coverage of Internet, we can reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world. Via Internet, we can send and receive E-mails at any time much faster, cheaper and more effective than conventional means such as telephone, telex and fax. Next, via access to the home pages of libraries, universities, journals and news agencies, and research organizations, we can easily acquire all kinds of information, to know what is going on all over the world. Finally, by clicking the mouse, we are capable of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, making friends, down-loading files and programs, doing business, publishing papers and freely airing our opinions on all sorts of interesting issues. What is more, Internet offers many opportunities. For example, we can work, educate ourselves and communicate with others at home via Internet.

In the Information Age, it is difficult to imagine modern life without Internet. With the rapid development of Information Technology industry, successful dot-com companies mushroomed everywhere. Internet is revolutionizing our economy, our society and our life. 第三篇

1. Directions: In this part, you are to write a composition of no less than 150 words about “College Graduates Work as Village Officials”. (大学生当村官)You should write according to the outline given below. Please remember to write it clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Some college graduates choose to work as village officials.

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1. Do you think it is a good idea? 2. What can they offer the countryside?

3. What can they gain from their village positions? 作文:

There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today how college graduates should choose their careers. Some time ago, it was reported that some college graduates chose to work as village officials. To this people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view while others are against it. As far as I am concerned, I believe that it is a wise choice.

On the one hand, college graduates can contribute a lot to the development of the countryside. First, they can apply their professional knowledge there. Secondly, they can introduce new concepts to the countryside and speed the development of rural culture. As a result, the gap between the city and the countryside can well be bridged.

On the other hand, these graduates can benefit a lot from working as village officials. While too many college graduates are fighting for the handful of positions in big cities, these graduates can find themselves a wider stage of development and realize their value.

Therefore, college graduates working as village officials is a win-win choice and more graduates should be encouraged to work in the countryside. 第四篇

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words on the topic “Whether College Students Should Be Allowed to Get Married” and you’re your article on the following outline. 1. Choose either of the two positions: College students should (not) be allowed to get married. 2. State your reasons for or against the issue

3. Conclusion

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Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married?

There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today whether college students should be allowed to get married. Some time ago, the ban was lifted by some universities on students getting married. To this people’s attitudes differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They say that most college students are adults and that it is a basic right for those who have reached the appropriate ages to get married. Besides, they argue that with their biological and emotional needs met, these students will study better. // The ban on this means a severe violation of human rights.

Many others, however, hold the negative/opposite view. They claim that the university or college is a place to study instead of a community to lead family life. Allowing college students to get married would adversely affect their study. For instance, they would spend too much time attending their family and love, unable to concentrate on their school work. As far as I am concerned,/ Weighing the arguments of both sides, I believe that it is OK to allow college students to get married. Anyway, this is their freedom. Actually, we don’t have to worry too much because facts have shown that most college students would choose not to get married in the face of such fierce competition and heavy school work.

(或 As far as I am concerned,/ Weighing the arguments of both sides, I believe that college students should not be allowed to get married. Though mostly adults, they are actually immature psychologically. Their wishes to get married are, more often than not, impulses. Besides, as students, they are not ready to support a family financially.

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words on the topic “Military Training” and you’re your article on the following outline. 1. 有些人赞成学生参加军训 2. 有些人反对 3. 你的观点

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There is no denying the fact that it has been a hotly debated topic whether students should attend military training in China in the past years. Opinions on this issue differ sharply. Some hold the positive view. They say that the training can not only build up students’ bodies but also temper their willpower. Besides, through the training, students can develop their team-spirit and sense of discipline.

Others, however, hold the opposite view. They say that a short period of training as students are having now cannot work well in building up their bodies or strengthen their will. Instead, we should lay emphasis on their daily exercise and activities for such purpose. What’s more, a sudden increase of intense physical exercise, especially during summer, does harm to students’ health and may even cause deaths. What happened in the past years has proved this.

Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the former point of view. Military training is not only a means to strengthen student’s physique and willpower, but also an effective way to enhance their sense of national defense and foster their patriotism. Though some deaths happened during the training, we should not give up eating for fear of choking. Besides, the deaths are perfect evidence that students need more such training. Of course, measures should be taken to ensure that the least harm is done to the trainees. 第六篇

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Buying Lottery Tickets. You should write at least 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline given below: 1. 有些人赞成买彩票 2. 有些人反对买彩票 3. 你的观点

Buying Lottery Tickets

There is no denying the fact that buying lottery tickets is a hotly debated topic in China today. / There is no denying the fact that buying lottery tickets is becoming popular in China today. Some people believe that it is beneficial in many ways. In the first place, it helps raise money for such groups as the poor and the disabled as well as for such causes as sports. (Thus,

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the heavy financial burden on the government will be relieved or even removed.) In the second place, lottery games provide people with a means of entertainment or pastime. (Without lottery games, many people might find nothing interesting to do. Last but not least, by buying lottery tickets, one may make a fortune overnight.)

Others, however, hold the opposite view. They say that buying lottery tickets is actually a kind of gambling. People are encouraged to earn money through guessing instead of down-to-earth labor. As a result, some people are tempted to commit crimes. A case in point is the two bank clerks in Hebei who stole millions of money from the bank to buy lottery tickets.

Weighing the arguments of both sides, I am inclined to agree with the former. Lottery games can serve as a good means to raise funds. But the ticket buyers should keep in mind the original purpose of such games, that is, to help the underprivileged or to contribute to public welfare. If they happen to win the prizes, it’s nothing but a return for their kindness.

(Personally, I think that both sides have something right. Actually, lottery games should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with both benefits and troubles. But we should not give up eating for fear of choking. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize their advantages and eliminate their unhealthy side-effects. Or in other words, we should further develop lottery games and exert proper supervision over them so that they can benefit us in a better way.) 第七篇

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Keeping Pets. You should write at least 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline below: 1. 有些人赞成养宠物 2. 有些人反对养宠物 3. 你的观点

Keeping Pets

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There is no denying the fact that keeping pets is a hotly debated topic today. Some people claim that keeping pets is a good thing to do. They believe that pets, like cats and dogs, can help relieve the loneliness suffered by senior citizens and other social members who are confined to their homes for this reason or that. They also argue that keeping pets helps mankind understand animals’ world and develop positive feelings toward them.

Others, however, hold the opposite view. They regard keeping pets as a useless but harmful thing to do. First, pets can transmit diseases. Secondly, the noises and dung of pets are sources of pollution. Last but not least, as many rare birds and animals are kept as pets, they will surely be hunted on a large scale, which means a threat to the balance of the ecosystem. Weighing the arguments of both sides, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Anyway, we can lessen our loneliness and express our love toward animals in other ways. And it is my belief that only by placing man and other species on an equal basis can we expect to have a lively and colorful world. 第八篇

Directions: In this section, you are asked to write a composition entitled Should people own cars or not? Your composition should be based on the outline given below. Your composition should be at least 150 words. Outline:

1. 有人赞成个人买车。 2. 也有人持相反观点。 3. 你的看法。

6. Should People Own Cars or Not? (a)

There is no denying the fact that it has been a hotly debated topic in China whether people should have their own cars. People’s opinions differ sharply on this issue. Some hold the positive view. They say that the car provides the most convenient form of transportation. Besides, a car is a comfortable way to travel, especially in winter. Finally, a driver is usually safe in his car when he is out at night.

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Others, however, hold the opposite view. They say that there are many disadvantages to owning a car. For one thing, it can be very expensive to purchase and run a car. For another, owning a car can also cause worry and stress. It is exhausting to drive a car in heavy traffic. What is worse, cars are responsible for most of the smog in cities, which pollutes the environment seriously.

In spite of all the above mentioned, I still favor owning a car. The reason is that the car gives a person the freedom to schedule his own time. Though we are confronted with a problem of energy crisis, I am sure that the real solution will have to be a new kind of car, one that uses cheap, efficient fuel and does not contaminate the air. (b)

Nowadays, an increasing number of people have become car owners. Yet there is no consensus on the development of private cars. Some people hold the positive view. They say that the car is the result of modern science and technology and everyone is entitled to enjoy it. They also argue that the development of private cars will vigorously stimulate the development of other industries and the whole national economy.

Others, however, hold the negative view. They point out that the increasing number of cars has led to a series of problems. First, they result in air pollution, which seriously damage people’s health. Secondly, too many cars on the road easily lead to traffic jams, which actually slow down the pace of life and work.

Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. The government should put a ban on the development of private cars and exert more efforts to develop public transportation, such as buses and subways. In this way, we can both enjoy efficiency and a clean environment. 第九篇

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards. You should write at least 150 words: 1. 出国留学有很多好处 2. 出国留学也会遇到很多难题

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3. 你的选择

Studying Abroad: Hardships and Rewards

There is no denying the fact that studying abroad is a hotly debated topic today. Obviously, studying abroad has a number of rewards/advantages. In the first place, a student can have access to advanced science and technology as well as desirable working conditions which might not be available at home. In the second place, he can be exposed to entirely new ideas and trends. Last but not least, by living and studying in a foreign country, one can improve his foreign language much faster than at home.

Nevertheless, as every coin has two sides, studying abroad also confronts one with a series of hardships. For one thing, learning a foreign language is far from an easy thing at the beginning for most people. For another, a completely new environment with different customs and habits may also be a barrier to overseas students, especially to the young. An added difficulty lies with finance: it can cost a lot to study abroad.

From my point of view, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages. But it is a big decision to go abroad to study and one should take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding. Personally, I choose to go abroad and study if I find it necessary.

(Therefore, studying abroad should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with both benefits and troubles. The best policy, as I see it, is to take into consideration his financial conditions and his ability to adapt to new surrounding. Personally, I choose to go abroad and study if I find it necessary.) 第十篇

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should the Golden Week Vacations Be Abolished? You should write at least 150 words: 1)黄金周确实推动了中国经济的发展,丰富了人们的生活 2) 但黄金周制度也造成了很多问题 3) 我的态度

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Should the Golden Week Holidays Be Abolished?

There is no denying the fact that the introduction of the Golden Week holidays in China has considerably promoted the development of the nation’s economy and touring industry and enriched people’s life. People around the country have spent more time and money traveling and relaxing themselves.

As every coin has two sides, the Golden Week holidays have also brought about piles of problems. For one thing, due to the fact that people across the country are spending their vacations during the same period of time, it is terribly crowded almost everywhere: trains, buses, hotels, scenic spots, etc., which have ruined people’s mood for vacations. For another, some businessmen take advantage of the weeklong holidays and raise the priced of commodities and services.

Personally, I believe that it is necessary for people to have long vacations, but there is no need for them to have the vacations during the same period of time. Instead, they should be allowed the freedom to arrange their own vacations. Only in this way can they really relax and refresh themselves for a new round of work. 第十一篇

Directions: In this section, you are asked to write a composition entitled Internet — A Two-edged Sword. You should write at least 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1. Internet的功绩。 2. Internet的弊端。 3. 结论。

Internet — A Two-edged Sword (互联网——双刃剑)

Internet is playing an increasingly important role in people's life. As a newborn information delivering system, the Internet has made seas of information available at our fingers’ tips. Besides, the Internet serves as the most convenient means for communication. Through the Internet, people can discuss various problems and make friends who share common views.

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But just as a coin has two sides, Internet has its own drawbacks which should not be neglected. First, it costs an alarming amount of money to construct the system and the cost is very high to most Chinese consumers. Second, it is sometimes difficult for people to find the right information they are looking for since there is too much rubbish on the net. Finally, it is also difficult to prevent the net from the invasion of criminals.

Therefore, the Internet should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with both conveniences and troubles. But we should not give up eating for fear of choking. The best policy, as I see it, is to further develop the net and exert proper supervision over it so that it can benefit us in a better way. 第十二篇

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Water Shortage. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline given below: 1. Water shortage is becoming an urgent problem 2. Possible solutions

Water Shortage

No one can have failed to notice the fact that water shortage is a grave problem with which the whole world is confronted. Actually, it has become so widespread that it has severely affected people’s daily life and hindered the development of the global economy.

A number of factors could account for the problem, but the following might be the critical ones. First, with the development of agriculture and industry, an increasing amount of water is needed. Secondly, the ever-increasing population is another leading cause of water shortage. Besides, the global tendency of warming up also contributes to the problem. What’s worse, pollution and waste of fresh water aggravate the situation.

In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforced to protect water resources. Secondly, people should enhance their awareness of saving water. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.

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第十三篇 2008年6月21日 英语六级作文真题及范文 Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? 1、随着信息技术的发展,电子图片越来越多; 2、有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书,理由是...... 3、我的看法 范文1:

The number of E-books is constantly on the rise as a result of the rapid development of information technology. It is thought by some people that E-books might replace traditional books in some time because of various advantages of E-books over paper ones.

A great variety of reasons are held by people with the above viewpoint in which economy is the key factor to make such prediction attainable. To start with, since all E-books could be downloaded from the internet, most of which are free of charge, whereas paper books in book stores are relatively expensive. Besides, the popularity of E-books could reduce or even avoid the waste of paper. Finally, E-books can be easily stored in our computer or other portable disks while paper books usually occupy too much space on our shelves.

In short, E-books have obviously become more and more popular in our daily life. As long as we can ensure the safety of E-books, we can enjoy a better life. 范文2:

With the advancement of science and technology, there’s a steady increase in the number of E-books, or electronic books. Some experts have claimed that these books will be prevalent, thus rendering all traditional ones in disuse, however, other authorities maintain that the traditional books are here to stay. From my perspective, I’m firmly sided with the former. There are several reasons responsible for my point. For one thing, it is convenient for people to carry E-books around. Therefore, readers will be no longer concerned about the heavy burden within their bag. What’s more, a considerable number of E-books can be stored away altogether in the reading gadget thanks to their digital pattern, which is a huge leap

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from conventional books given its cost-reducing and space-saving nature. Above all, people might finally find a workable solution to deforestation, a result brought about by paper use.

To sum up, traditional books will still be the leading means of reading, however, sooner or later, the age of paper books will be ultimately outlived by E-books.

第十四篇

2008.12.20 英语六级作文真题及范文 范文一\\

How to improve student's mental health 1、 大学生的心理健康十分重要 2、 因此,学校可以...... 3、 我们自己应当......

In modern society, people are destined to cope with a lot of pressure, from either outer world or inner will. The cases of suicide in campus in recent years fully reveal the importance of mental health.

As a consequence, it is imperative for the colleges and universities to take effective actions. In the first place, the authorities concerned should enhance the awareness of college students that mental fitness is of utmost significance to them. It is true that physical factors affect one’s health conditions a great deal, but at the same time, we should not neglect the mental factors. In the second place, the universities should frequently enlighten the juvenile to keep optimistic in their daily life.

Hence, it is vital for us to keep mental health under whatsoever circumstances. All of us have experienced failures. However, some with self-confidence may draw lessons from failure and achieve success, while others are desperately frustrated. When most people are aware of the significance of physical health, we must also remind them of the value of mental health.

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Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.

Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. What's more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others.

From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue. 第十五篇

六级作文题目:On the Importance of a Name 1.有人认为名字很重要, 2.也有人认为无关紧要, 3.我认为 (参考范文)

On the Importance of a Name

In recent years, many people become more and more concerned about the importance of a name. They choose very carefully the names for their children and sometimes even for the shop, restaurant or the company they run. They consider

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that a name can influence a person’s whole life. What’s more, some people believe that sometimes a good name would bring good luck.

However, people’s view varies from person to person. Not everyone thinks a deliberately chosen name really means so much. They argue that a name is just a name, to which people shouldn’t attach too much superstitious ideas. Success depends much more on hardworking and down-to-earth attitude than how you name a shop or a person.

As far as I am concerned, I favor the latter opinion. Although a carefully chosen name can tell the best wishes of the elder for the young generation, we still ought not to rely on the fortune a name can bring, nor can we blame our occasional bad luck on it. (160词)

从命题形式上看,近几年的六级作文题几乎没有变化,均为提纲式命题作文,而且都是典型的三段式结构,比较好写。由此看来,命题者在命题形式上保持了相对的稳定性,便于考生学习复习过程中有的放矢。 从写作的题材要求看,与往年的有点不一样。过去的写作内容往往涉及学生的学习生活等学生们最为熟悉的内容,如08年写“大学生心理健康”、“电子图书”,07年的“数字化产品”、“雷锋精神”,06年“阅读经典著作”等,都是大学生们再熟悉不过的东西。

今年要求写“名字的重要性”,从题材上看也许有些让人意外,但实际上是在情理之中。写作考查考生的语言运用能力,打好了足够的语言基础,任何题目都能展示考生的语言运用能力,因此,从某种意义上讲,也可看作一种“反押题”的宣示。“名字的重要性”这个命题出的相当的好。一方面避开了猜题押题的投机行为,更重要的是以考试的形式,向学生灌输“提倡科学,反对迷信”的思想,对帮助大学生树立正确的人生观有着非常正面的积极意义。

“命名的重要性”虽然不是学生特别熟悉或看重的内容,但也是社会热点之一。由此看来,为了增强我们今后复习备考的针对性,我们必须还要关注身边的小事、社会热点等,时刻做有心人。 行文思路:

1)根据题纲“有人认为名字很重要”提出这种社会现象,列举一到三个例子,分析这种现象的原因及人们的心理。

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2)采用正确的段落过渡手段,引出有人持不同看法,如However, people’s view varies from person to person等。进而指出名字与运气、名字与成功的关系,同时对这种迷信思想给与批判。

3)支持上面的一种观点,简单说说理由,指出名字没有好坏,它与运气和成功没有因果关系。

在具体写作过程中,考生要把握以下几点:第一、提出清晰的观点,然后作出符合逻辑的展开。首先考虑好观点,再将观点展开并划分成多个短句,最后按英语的语法句法特点和要求进行表述。第二、表达时用自己有把握的句型句式,不要仅仅为了突出所谓的新意而找些生僻词汇,也许没记准而出现拼写错误,也许用词词不当,类似问题要尽量避免。第三、在熟练准确的基础上用少量的大词和较为复杂的句型结构,会为文章增色不少,使文章的得分档次得到提升。如范文中的词汇deliberately chosen name,down-to-earth attitude及句型to which people shouldn’t attach too much superstitious ideas等都是文章的闪光点。

第十六篇 旅游业对环境带来的损害

Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? You are to write in three parts.

In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.

In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion,

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary,

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result may result in a loss of marks. 参考范文:

In recent years, tourism has developed rapidly in China. Many people believe that tourism produce positive effects on economic growth and we should try our best to promote tourism. But what these people fail to see is that tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our environment. As for me, I'm firmly convinced that too much tourists bring harm to the environment.

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The bad impact of tourism on the environment has mainly expressed itself in various ways. One way is the process of exploiting a new scenic spot. In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment. This process usually breaks the ecological balance of the area. In some mountainous places, trees are being cut down to build hotels for others to see and explore the beauty of the mountains. Then land slides and mud-rock flows come up. Another way the development of tourism has damaged the environment occurs when tourists go to scenic spots. Some tourists don't have the awareness to protect the environment, and ignorantly throw their garbage here and there. Some people even kill the local wildlife to eat, which badly damages the balance of the natural environment.

It is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism. We must keep in mind that too much tourists bring harm to the environment. We need to find a balance between satisfying the needs of tourists and reducing to a minimum the pollution they cause. 好词佳句总结:

bring about 造成, 引起〔导致〕(某事) e.g.

Gambling had brought about his ruin. 赌博终于毁了他。

a disastrous impact 灾难性影响 firmly convinced that 深信不疑 Exploit scenic spots 开发风景区 artificial facility 人造设施 unfavorable effect 不利影响

break the ecological balance 破坏生态平衡 land slide 滑坡,土崩

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mud-rock flows 泥石流 ignorantly 无知地

throw garbage here and there 乱丢垃圾

It is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism. 为旅游增长而牺牲环境是错误的。最后一段阐明观点。

We need to find a balance between satisfying the needs of tourists and reducing to a minimum the pollution they cause. 该句式还可套用于类似话题,更换划线部分即可。 第十七篇 人口老龄化问题

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitle Population Burden. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1.人口老龄化问题正困扰着中国。 2.人口老龄化带来的问题。

3.应采取怎样的措施,谈谈自己的观点。我要收藏 题目分析:

在世界人口走向老龄化和发达国家人口老龄化发展的同时,中国人口老龄化也在加剧。人口老龄化的产生,正是社会进步、经济发展的结果。 参考范文: Population Burden

Many countries will experience aging populations in the next century because of declining birth and mortality rates. China will soon join their ranks.

As for the issue of aging, its situation has been growing increasingly severe in spite of the fact most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about. Firstly, with families becoming smaller and living pace escalating, it is even graver for families to care for aged members adequately. Secondly, aging causes a relative decline in working force in that fewer

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people have to support the increasing aged people. Consequently, the productivity of the whole society is affected to some extent. Thirdly and most importantly, the aging of population in China resulted from the successful implementation of family planning has not been synchronized with national economic progress.

The rapidity of the population's aging has made it more urgent for the adoption of countermeasures. No doubt they key is to build a solid economic foundation. Meanwhile, importance shall be attached to overall social progress by changing the backward situation in social security, welfare and service. What's more, family care and community services shall also be encouraged.

好词佳句总结: aging population 老年人口 birth rate 出生率 mortality rate 死亡率 ignorant of 不知道,不懂 graver 更严重的

e.g. This heavy rain could have grave consequences. 这场大雨会造成严重后果。 adequately 充分地 productivity 生产力 implementation 执行 family planning 计划生育

rapidity 速度 在这用rapidity比speed 好 countermeasure 对策

solid economic foundation 稳固的经济基础 Population old age人口老龄化

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Population burden人口负担 Old age social security老年社会保障 Sustainable development可持续发展 第十八篇 大学生忙考证的利弊

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitle On Qualification-obtaining Fever. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.

1 校园“考证族”的队伍不断壮大,很多学生忙于考区各种资格证书 2 大学生忙考证的利弊 3 你的观点 题目分析:

本文围绕大学生忙于考取各种证书的情况展开论述。此类作文通常要在第一段指出这种现象,并进行简要描述;接下来详细论述这种现象的利弊或产生的原因;最后表明自己的观点。 参考范文:

On Qualification-obtaining Fever

Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates. Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science. Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it. No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own. They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities. Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.

However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages. First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or

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major learning. Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden. Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.

From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained. 好词佳句总结:

fever 狂热。可用指某种现象 vocational qualification 职业证照 work-related 与工作有关 credentials 学历资历等的资格 at the expense of以……为代价

范文最后一句,使用该句式又稳妥,又能拿个不错的分数。 From my point of view, what matters most is… not… 第十九篇

2007年12月22日六级作文题目 The digital age 1.如今,数字化产品越来越多,如…

2.使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响。

The digital age

With the development of our technologies, the digital products are also blooming rapidly everywhere. We are bathed in a new era where diverse newly-developed digital products such as digital camera, digital computer are replacing our traditional ones at a high speed. It has remarkably impacted on our life. Decidedly, the digital products really offer us a far more convenient life than ever. Take digital camera for example, we no longer need to upload the camera with films and worry if there are sufficient films in the procedure of photographing. We can take innumerable photos as we like without

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worrying about spoiling films . Moreover, we can delete unsatisfied ones freely. Furthermore, the qualities and quantities of photos taken with digital cameras are superior to those taken with traditional ones! How greatly it has facilitated our work!

Nevertheless, as the saying goes, every coin has two sides. Digital product is also a double-edge sword. It also has its inevitable negative effects. For example, nowadays we are so much dependent on the digital computers that we are immersed in online-chatting instead of communicating face to face, which to a large pitch isolates ourselves from the real world. Furthermore, we are inclined to keep all the key data in our digital products. Once the products are damaged or lost, we will say goodbye to all forever! So to this point, it is unwise for us to rely too much on digital products.

Of course, all in all, digital products’ advantages many more outweigh their disadvantages. Hence we should make the best of its good and simultaneously ward its bad off! Only by doing so can digital products authentically bring happiness and welfare to our mankind! 第二十篇

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1、 有人做好事期望得到回报;

2、 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报; 3、 我的观点。 写作范文

Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

A great many people presume upon a reward when doing a good deed. First and foremost, there is a natural tendency to equate doing good deeds with a certain amount of reward, and reward with a certain amount of money. What is more, they maintain that since the basis of contemporary society is money, one of the major means of earning money is getting reward by doing good deeds.

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On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that doing a good deed should be based on people's personal interests. Hence, doing a good deed is fulfilling itself and reward is of minimal significance. Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. Mr. Lei feng lived a simple life dedicated to doing good deeds without expecting any reward and helping people from all walks of life, yet he was remembered as one of the most successful hero of our time.

Generally speaking, it is my view that we should not expect a reward when doing a good deed. We do this for enjoyment, fulfillment and other spiritual enhancement, not for the purpose of reward. 第二十一篇

1.目前很多人报考研究生

2 我认为形成这股热潮的原因是…… 3 自拟标题 题目分析:

研究生,作为找到一份好工作的有力筹码,更是处于经济危机水深火热中毕业生们的一个热门选择,因此本文可围绕考研的种种好处以及结合经济危机进行讨论。 参考例文:

The Post-graduate Craze

Each year, millions of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination. More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education.

What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma? First, it is the demand of the time. In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society. Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever. That is why many students will further their studies.

Second, we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to succeed. Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for

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promotion and training. A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.

Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for jobs becomes more and more fierce. One way to gain some advantage over others is to have a higher degree. No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree. 好词佳句总结:

post-graduate entrance examination 研究生入学考试 入学考试有很多 如高考;college(or university) entrance examination

pursue vt. 追求 名词格式 pursuit 有部电影叫 The Pursuit of Happiness 当幸福来敲门 indispensable adj. 必不可少的, 必需的,在讨论某种积极事物时候都可以用到。 account for

说明〔解释〕…原因

an age of knowledge updating and information explosion 一个知识不断更新和信息爆炸的时代 同样,也可作为套语使用。

preferential treatment 优惠待遇

No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree. 文章点睛之笔。

从文章结构看,首先阐明考研热热现象,然后分析考研热并罗列三点原因,结尾点睛。 注意套语的熟练使用,此类文章层次感极为重要,要让改卷老师对你的文章结构一目了然

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